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Old 08-29-2001, 01:59 PM
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100% comepletely off topic....

I just finished a new website....I'm looking for some flames/suggestions.....

It's for a counterstrike gaming group I lead.

Anyone looking to waste some time...check it out:

http://www.team4play.com

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Old 08-29-2001, 02:08 PM
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You have an extraneous apostrophe. There are only two very limited exceptions when an apostrophe should be used to pluralize a word. Yours fits neither, so take it out.

Other than that, it's a nice beginning for your site.

I loved HL and played many, many matches, but I only played Counterstrike once or twice. I'm hoping to get back into a little HL very soon.
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You have an extraneous apostrophe. There are only two very limited exceptions when an apostrophe should be used to pluralize a word. Yours fits neither, so take it out.

Other than that, it's a nice beginning for your site.

I loved HL and played many, many matches, but I only played Counterstrike once or twice. I'm hoping to get back into a little HL very soon.
Yikes your right. Must have been a typo, my grammer isn't that bad.

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Yikes your right. Must have been a typo, my grammer isn't that bad.

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Yikes your right. Must have been a typo, my grammer isn't that bad.

Thanks,
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Wrong form of 'your...'

...and you spelled 'grammar' wrong.

Okay, okay, I'll stop...
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Wrong form of 'your.'

Okay, okay, I'll stop...
Sheesh...sorry:

Yikes you are corrent!

Is that more betters for you?

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