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ensteele if im correct this is the general babble secetion were people post stuff that has nothing to do with the svx I see alot of threads in here that have nothing to do with a svx so please dont single me out here is a story with no profanity or racial slurs so please dont delete it. Its fair and netural





Well, she was a pretty girl had everything any man would be more than happy to have accept for me. I was different, not the type to go chasing tail just because I liked the way it wagged. But this girl…she was different. I don’t know what it was about her but she had me from the start. Everything about her was beauty to me. I just had to get to know her. So I introduced myself to her and shared a polite conversation or two got her number and kept peace with her. I hate to say it now, but I had fallen for the girl, a mistake that I knew was wrong from the start. The girl was fine and I wasn’t the only one that was noticing this. Of course there’s always competition. Little did I know my competitor was right behind my back the whole time.A clever idiot, that had been sneaking up on my game the whole time. The fool sat a couple seats from me in class. The whole time this yahoo was watching us and learning the do’s and don’t’s of this girl off my game. One day I came to class late and caught the bitter end of it. No longer was the idiot a couple seats over, but he was in my spot right next to the girl. Had his arm around her even. Couldn’t believe it. I had done everything for this girl and in return she slapped me in the face. A fool a was. I should have watched my moves more closely, now a fool was closing in on what I had been working to achieve. I didn’t say much to the girl after that. What could I say? Thank you for pushing me aside? I called her once or twice out of curiosity, but her conversations where limited no warm feeling anymore. But why? The reason I myself had hidden from the consciousness of my own mind. It was obvious what she was interested in. She wanted a baller someone who could spend $$$ on her. As all pretty faces do have a price. For her I guess I wasn’t this. Little did she know I had something else that this yahoo didn’t have. Sitting home in my garage was a 1998 Saleen Cobra and she was Bad in Black. It was a gift from my brother. It was a car he gave to me after he opened his dealership up. No one knew that I had this car. I never even drove it (insurance reasons $$$$). I was hopping to take Kay “the girl” on a date in her maiden voyage, but I guess it wouldn’t be happening now. My daily driver is my 1989 Honda rusted out accord. Complete with “speed holes” and 110,000 miles on the dash. I remember how Kay would tease me about my car and laugh at me even. Little did she know…I never talked about the Saleen. I’m not a bragger, not a showoff, and I appreciated the gift, so much so that I babied it. I decided it was time to take on a new. I was so furiated at this girl my timing couldn’t have been mor perfect. Friday night was the campus party. I knew she and the idiot would be there. I would be there too….! I kept quiet all week hiding my emotions from her and melting away inside at the heartbreak she caused me. Finally it was Thursday night and I went out to the garage. I took out some armoral and started shinning up the tires. I than made sure the car was glistening! I sprayed on the Meguires and shinned away. The car was glowing radiantly in a sea of black the reflection off her hood was beautiful…but there was one problem. She wasn’t registered. No biggy, I just swapped the plates off my rust banger civic and put them on the Saleen. I guess this should do me for the moment. That night I went to sleep. The first calm sleep I had in a while. The sleep that only vengeance could bring. I awoke and Friday was there. I had a smile on my face. I spent the earlier half of the day prepping the Saleen again. I sat in my room watching my favorite movie “mad max.” Finally the hour was hear it was 1:30am and I knew that the party would be ending soon. I went out to the garage and started the Saleen up. GRRMMMMM she rumbled as I awoke her from her sleep. I drove off in a passion of fury. My wheels sctreetching as I turned corners. I got to the party and waited in the lot. Just as I knew it the idiots car was sitting there. His preppy dubbed up 2002 Maxima sitting in the lot. I sat in my car for about 45mins till I saw them walking out. They got in the car and started it up. I watched them pull off and then I started my car up and followed. I stayed 4 cars lengths away from them. Not knowing how I was going to introduce myself to them. The lights ahead were turning Red and I noticed that the lane next to me was empty. I quickly pulled out into the lane and stomped on it. I breezed right up to the Maxima. They couldn’t even see who was driving the tent was so dark. It was beautiful. I decided that I had been passive long enough. I pushed my clutch in and pressed the gas in. The car howled! I immediately caught their attention as they were now looking over at me. I rolled my window down. Kays eyes dropped when she saw that I was driving the car. “WHERE DID YOU GET THAT CAR!” was the first the she said to me. I just looked at her and smiled and told her that it was mine. All of a sudden the light turned green and I took off. Leaving her gold digging self behind!

thanks for the honest criticism im glad you can tell me your thoughts without slashing me

[ensteele]

Blue

Why don't you start out and tell us a little about yourself. What you do, your likes and hobbies. What is your car like and have you done any special work to it. Are you having any troubles with it, and post a few pictures of your car so we can see it. I hope this will help for you to get off on the right track. We are friendly people and enjoy talking about "The SVX" - surprise! If we see any cars, we try to get them to stop by here and join this forum so we can get to know more owners. I hope this helps you understand who we are.

[wasions]

I just hope the guy in the story wasn't really you. I'd like it better if I knew it was a daydream, and not real life.

[Subafreak]

Not a bad story but, it needs an ending. Something tragick and sick.

[svx_commuter]

Like a police officer pulls him over and hauls his a$$ to jail for no registration.

And Kay comes and bails him out.

Says she like him more than the car, made a big mistake but wants to drive it.

[Noir]

hey guys, what's funny is that i had no idea what a saleen cobra was. had to do a search to see that it was a ford mustang lol. boy am i clueless.

anyway, i'm surprised that you are 26 blue. i only thought that those stories were high school stories. if she was a gold digger, then why even risk going to jail to show off? no offense to the women on the board because the rule applys for men too but there are 'lots of fish in the sea.' so why worry about it? if you think that you need to impress a girl with a car to get her attention then you probably need to re-evaluate what you are looking for.

just my 3 pennies.

[Aredubjay]

Originally posted by svx_commuter
Like a police officer pulls him over and hauls his a$$ to jail for no registration.

. . . or arrests him for imitating a writer.

[WestCoastSVX]

I learned a long time ago that this is not the place to share your work if your truly do have writing as a passion.

[Subafreak]

Originally posted by svx_commuter
Like a police officer pulls him over and hauls his a$$ to jail for no registration.

And Kay comes and bails him out.

Says she like him more than the car, made a big mistake but wants to drive it.

No tragik like like: as they both burn tire away from the stop light and accelerate toward the train tracks exactly a 1/4 mile away, the Cobra walks the supercharged Maxima a good 2 car lengths, but the guy in the Maxima is to stuborn to give up so he keeps on it. As the Cobra jumps the tracks he notices the train rolling down the tracks, he looks in the rear veiw just in time to see the Maxima get tagged in the passingers side by the train. As the car spins off in to a power line it showers sparks and ignites the ruptured fuel tank bursting the car into flames. The driver jumps out and runs away from the wreakage leaving the girl of desire trapped in the flames. The girls screams in pain as the fire melts her flesh in to the glowing red seat frames on the car. Unfortunatlly she is spared the mercy of death by an alert homeowner with a hose and a neighbor with an extigisher. The parametics arrive in time to peal her chared body from the smoldering metal and keep her alive to endure a painful and pointless recovery. Once the object of every guys affection, now a hidyous creature that everyone turns away from in disscust.


Now that is tragik and sick.

[Uncamitzi]

Originally posted by blue94svxlsi
...dont single me out here is a story with no profanity or racial slurs so please dont delete it. Its fair and netural...

I'm sorry... It may be netural.... but it's much worse than fair...


MHO sorry

[Alycone]

Originally posted by Subafreak
The driver jumps out and runs away from the wreakage leaving the girl of desire trapped in the flames. The girls screams in pain as the fire melts her flesh in to the glowing red seat frames on the car. Unfortunatlly she is spared the mercy of death by an alert homeowner with a hose and a neighbor with an extigisher. The parametics arrive in time to peal her chared body from the smoldering metal and keep her alive to endure a painful and pointless recovery.

Nice writing.

[Subafreak]

Originally posted by Alycone


Nice writing.

Thanks, thats the most I'v tried writing since......Oh my god I'v been out of highschool for 8years!

[ensteele]

What was that which flew over his head?

[Subafreak]

Todd flew over my head?