[Mr. Pockets]

Incidentally, Adam, I'd like to counter the non-profanity votes with my own. I don't have a problem with the language in your story.

Some people do, however, so I'd recommend that you give fair warning in the future. We don't allow language like that on this site, so please make sure that people know what they're clicking on.

BTW keep writing. I don't any more. My new theory is that my head can only contain so many ideas, good or bad. If I don't express them or at least get them down on paper, they'll eventually get pushed out through my ears and onto the floor. Then the boss's dog eats them.